Heretical Fishing

Book 2: An invitation for feedback.

Hello, dear friends.

The epilogue for book two has gone up. Now that I'm going into the whole-book editing phase, I wanted to ask if you had any constructive feedback for me. I have a lot of things that I want to sharpen and improve, but as the author, I can be blind to issues.

If you don't have any feedback on book 2, I would still love to know what you do and don't like about the series as a whole. IE. Do you love the cooking scenes, or are they a little tiring for you? Do you like the fishing, or is that aspect getting a little repetitive in your opinion? etc.

It will help me sharpen the words I've already written, and better understand how I can improve the words still to come.

Keep in mind that I can't promise to change anything, because at the end of the day, I need to stay true to the story and the vision I have for it. There is, however, a bit of flexibility. As you are the people who like my work enough to support me, I can't think of anyone better to give me critique.

PS. Please be kind to each other in the comments. Everyone likes different things, and that's okay. If you agree with what someone says, give the comment a like or something so I can better gauge its weight.

I love you.

The poll with all of your wonderful suggestions for book 3's first animal pal will be going up tomorrow; I want to give a little more time for people to comment.